
louie9090
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Fire, Water, Wind, and Earth: Sign Up Thread * Chapter 2Edit=Sylph- The threads title was kinda confusing, so I changed it.
An unknown power has emerged, and all sides are scrambling to recruit it. The power, however, doesn't want to be recruited and remains hidden to all who seek it. While it's allegiance is uncertain, one thing's for sure: whoever can get this power to help their cause will win the war.
Elemental
*Name:
*Gender:
*Age:
*Appearance:
*Race (gnome, sylph, salimander, undine):
*Status (mage, commoner, advisor, counsel member, warrior, etc):
*Powers/weapons (you can have up to 3, please base it on your element):
*Alignment (neutral, elemental):
Other:
Dragon
*Name:
*Gender:
*Age:
*Appearnace:
*Status (mage, worker, advisor, warrior, etc.):
*Powers/weapons (again, only 3, you can breathe stuff):
*Alignment (neutral, dragon):
Other:
Humans
*Name:
*Gender:
*Age
*Appearance:
*Status (mage, warrior, commoner, etc.):
*Powers/weapons (you can only have powers if you're a mage, again only 3):
*Alignment (neutral, elemental, dragon):
Other:
ok, you start in your side's main city. and you can hve up to two characters, if you want. and you need to fill out the stars to play, of course.
already created characters:
Human
Name: Xaenai (played by louie9090)
Gender: girl
Age: 16
Appearance: white-blonde hair down to her shoulders, light blue-green eyes with flecks of grey. on the short side, skinny. wears a green tunic and brown britches.
Status: Warrior
Weapons: staff, long bow, daggers.
Alignment: neutral
Other: used to live on the streets before her town got destroyed in the war, so she knows how to pick pockets and read lips and other useful things most 'civalized' people don't know.
Human
Name: Kyo Sohma (played by Killer Slime)
Gender: M
Age 15
Appearance: orange hair, athletic looking.
Status (mage, warrior, commoner, etc.): commoner
Powers/weapons (you can only have powers if you're a mage, again only 3): martial artist
Alignment (neutral, elemental, dragon): neutral
Other:
Name: Revengaofar (Ree-ven/gwee-fur (think of the name Jenifer and it'll be easier to say) (played by Sylph)
Gender: Female
Age: adult (elemental age ranges are so vague: equivalent to human aged 25-35)
Appearance: That of a tall slender blonde human female with disturbingly blue eyes (natural state doesnt really have an appearance persay)
Race: sylph
Status: counsel member
Powers/weapons (long bow-embued with electrical damage, flight, an electricity based spell):
Alignment: neutral good elemental (or is elemental an alignment of its own?)
Other:
Elemental (played by K0zzy boy)
Name: Kaz (pronounced kozz, of course)
Gender: M
Age: Adult
Appearance: An yellow/orange-ish tint colored skin, a defined face (bit like a dragon's with those pointy chin and pointy eye spots, similar to the style of the cartoon "Jackie Chan Adventures"), standing upright with black (with white cuffs, cholar, etc.) martial arts-style long-sleeve shirt and pants.
Race: Salamander
Status: Cavalry squadron leader/commander
Powers/weapons: Grand Daiklave (ignore the Exalted and magically created bit, I just think they're awesome), fire breath, super-fit leg muscles for jumping high and running.
Alignment: Neutral
Other:
i didn't post Fishy's cause he doesn't post in chapter one.... if you wanna re-join it now would be the time...
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KillerSlime
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*Name: (unknown, goes by spark)
*Gender: NA
*Age: (unknown)
*Appearance: a small flame, flickering with varying hands and face and such.
*Race (gnome, sylph, salimander, undine):
*Status (mage, commoner, advisor, counsel member, warrior, etc):
*Powers/weapons (you can have up to 3, please base it on your element): ever-changing form(and controll over such, though size is proportionally draining), fire 'creation' magic (though it's easier as he doesn't have to create the fire, only manipulate a part of himself, and thus tied in with his previous), teleportation of self through fires/extreme heat, though does not need start fire as he is fire.
*Alignment (neutral, elemental): neutral
Other: fire! what more to say? doesn't have a corporeal form.
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louie9090
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O_o
lol... wierd but cool character. you're still using Kyo, right? and the hidden power is as follows (anyone can control it, but i'll do the post thing):
Elemental
*Name: Caen
*Gender: male
*Age: unknown
*Appearance: unknown
*Race (gnome, sylph, salimander, undine): unknown
*Status (mage, commoner, advisor, counsel member, warrior, etc):
*Powers/weapons (you can have up to 3, please base it on your element): unknown, thought to bear a broad sword and cross bow.
*Alignment (neutral, elemental, dragon): unknown
Other:
btw, that isn't my second character. this is:
Humans
*Name: Tisea
*Gender: gal
*Age 16
*Appearance:
minus the wings, combat boots, and blue skin. basicly: tall, skinny, black hair, tan skin, green eyes, wears dark skirt and shirt.
*Status (mage, warrior, commoner, etc.): mage
*Powers/weapons (you can only have powers if you're a mage, again only 3): weapons: basic hand-to-hand combat, Naginata (glaive), magic (well duh). powers: some healing magic, invisibility, has some training in manipulating the elements from elementals but not much.
*Alignment (neutral, elemental, dragon): neutral
Other: your typical rebellious teenager: short tempered, irrational, pessimist...
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~Sylph~
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Elemental
*Name: Böden Widerhallen
*Gender: Male
*Age: Middle Aged
*Appearance: 5’0” Build-Muscular thick compact frame, with a slight belly/ Hair-brown with flecks of blond, red and grey/ Eyes-brown/ Full unkempt beard, approximately 12 inches long/ drab earth tone tight fitting pants, a long sleeved button down jacket, and a pointy hat.
*Race (gnome, sylph, salimander, undine): Gnome
*Status (mage, commoner, advisor, counsel member, warrior, etc): Druid
*Powers/weapons (you can have up to 3, please base it on your element): Extreme Physical Conditioning (strength, speed, heightened senses, health, etc) and Animal Magic (communication, etc- includes healing).
*Alignment (neutral, elemental): True Neutral.
Other: Vegetarian prankster.
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louie9090
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sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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AHAHAHAHAHAHA
Oh my GOD! That's the best character ever, Sylph. Ahhhh. Great name, too.
Anywho, comments thus far: Spark sounds cool, a little dude is always cool. Caen... well, Louie, you totally cheated the system. "Unknown?" As for Tisea... Hawt. Lol. Or the fairy at the very least. *ahem* And I've already expressed my feelings on Böden.
So would someone please explain who these characters will be controlled by? I mean, from time to time players have to take liberties to move the story along and controll other characters' minor events. So will the controllers be the players who made them, or neutral, or what?
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~Sylph~
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| ~Sylph~ wrote: | Well, I try, when I sometimes borrow a character to move the plot along to follow some sort of sylph imposed rules.
I try to stay true to the person they belong to's choices for their charcter. Example of failure: Boden cooking a nice juicey steak (hes a vegan).
I use them for only a breif time
(this way if I do make mistakes they are small ones)
And I try to leave them with revokeable choices (in other words the chance to completely change course from the one I left them on.) Example: I believed Kaz would kill Idaur and Xae Vian, and set them on a course which seemed ripe with that potential, but obviously it was open ended enough to not lead to that conclusion in either case as that's not where either writer wished to take their character nor the story.
In other words, I think others characters should be short term loans that leave the ultimate desicions for that characters to their owners.
Whats everyone else think? |
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Uhm, A+ for the pointless quote tags?
But yeah, that's pretty much the morals I go by. Only itty bitty open-ended things that further the story and that would probably happen on their own since their characters would act that way naturally.
I'm tempted to make another character, but with the current main 10 existing right now, I think I'll let it go for a while... (Louie, you character hog. )
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Sorry for the double post, but yay for the seperate forum!
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KillerSlime
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i don't quite get mr. unknown...
i'd been planning that character for a while, was going to put him in when there was a good opertunity, as you can have up to two, but now seemed a good time... and suchlike. seems we all got an extra but you, Koz.
i restate that i don't get mr. unknown... i feel that a chara's personality is based off of one thing that the person who makes it believes it to be, and works from there. especially with so many blanks, and saying he's a free-for-all, i don't think he'll be thinking the same thought train from post to post.
and if we were to give him to you, then that's 3 for you. the rest of us got our own seconds but Koz, who i'm not sure would want him, and so either we bring in a new person, assign him to someone here, or try to sort out this confusion through apathy...
and, may i add, this whole "hidden power" thing happening in the few seconds it took us to run out the door and arround the corner? i don't think one man would get that repretation... i mean, he's no Vash the Stampede. unless he's some sort of mutant or something, super-powered, then i don't think he's as important as the mages in the war already.
don't mean to insult anyones ideas, of course, but i just don't understand that one character and this "hidden power"...
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louie9090
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Re: Fire, Water, Wind, and Earth: Sign Up Thread * Chapter 2*ahem*
| louie9090 wrote: |
An unknown power has emerged, and all sides are scrambling to recruit it. The power, however, doesn't want to be recruited and remains hidden to all who seek it. While it's allegiance is uncertain, one thing's for sure: whoever can get this power to help their cause will win the war.
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now this:
| Quote: | Elemental
*Name: Caen
*Gender: male
*Age: unknown
*Appearance: unknown
*Race (gnome, sylph, salimander, undine): unknown
*Status (mage, commoner, advisor, counsel member, warrior, etc):
*Powers/weapons (you can have up to 3, please base it on your element): unknown, thought to bear a broad sword and cross bow.
*Alignment (neutral, elemental, dragon): unknown
Other:
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i am not going to explain it to you. period. and anyone can control him, i just made him up. ok, Tisea, however, is mine. end of story. and the hidden power? it's sweet, ok? it's totally sweet. i might have exagerated a wee bit on the winning the war part. but i'm a writer. it's what i do.
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KillerSlime
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i'm still confused...
that still makes no sence to me...
but i've already said that... and i think other people are suffering from such problems... i'm really not understanding, but so far he seems to be your character.
all you told us about him is that he's a guy named caen with a "hidden power." it's not really much of anything to build a character off of...
was i rude before? i'm just trying to clear up my confusion...
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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You're not being mean, you're stating your opinion. In fact, if you need to do anything, it's stop apologizing.
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louie9090
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anyone can control him. that's what i'm saying. nobody has,though, so i'm stuck doing it. ok?
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Yo Sylph, would you mind naming the first chapter Fire, Wind, Water and Earth - Chapter 1: The Undoing? I thought it'd make it more aesthetically pleasing and it'd keep track of the chapters.
(Especially if they're all going to be named after 'U' words, hahaha.)
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KillerSlime
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as far as i know, though, you're the only one with much idea who or what he is... you didn't really describe him to us... unknown doesn't say much...
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louie9090
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that's the whole point. he's unknown.
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KillerSlime
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yes, but presumably he looks like something, acts like something...
you probably have ideas for him. we don't know what they are. how are we supposed to know who he is if we have no clue?
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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What his general appearance is would help. I mean, if the characters can see him, why can't the players?
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louie9090
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point. *sigh* well, i have no life, so i might as well. he's got black hair and dark eyes, tan skin, tall, muscular. basic hunky hero guy stuff. honestly, you guys should know this stuff ( ).
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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I was imagining something along the lines of Solid Snake from Metal Gear Solid this whole time. 'Sthat accurate enough?
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louie9090
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don't know who he is.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Of course you don't.
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louie9090
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i'm missing something... i don't know if i should take offense or ignore it...
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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The ladder!!
HAHAHAHA LADDER
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louie9090
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i would so hit you right now if i was in the same room as you... like i do to my cousin all the time.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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The latter, get it? Huh? Get it?
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louie9090
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*slaps forhead* no. i didn't get that, k0zzy boy. OF COURSE I GOT IT! i'm not stupid. now stop pushing my buttons and post in the RP all freaking ready.
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KillerSlime
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let's see if i can find this quote...
ah, here it is. "the glass isn't half empty OR half full, you're both just stupid!"
so, yeah.
actually, i was thinking Snake too. great minds run arround in similar little circles, as i've been told.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Hey, that's actually a pretty good quote. I've always thought it's a little of both "think alike" and "think 4 themselves (as said by the Genie from Alladin on some old cartoon show)" so that works quite nicely.
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louie9090
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The statistics on sanity are that one out of every 4 Americans are suffering from some form of mental illness. Think of your three best friends. If they're okay, then it's you.
Rita Mae Brown
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KillerSlime
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you saw that history show? i can't remember what it was called, but it had the animaniacs in. and it was funny.
one of us is mentally broken? my guess it's the squirrel.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Pfft, he's just slightly sadistic and can't type well. If anyone it'd be me. For god's sake, I'm calling myself Käz in real life now. No joke.
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KillerSlime
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okay, so back to discussing this FWWE universe. i think there is alot of racism... between all the races, even(though less so) between the different elementals. being human feels like being cattle. people treat you like you know nothing, can do nothing, etc. and they can easily outdo you with their various magics.
it's like, wow. we've created our own little racist RP world. and it's all pain for the humans... everyone else can defend themselves with magic, while few humans can learn it and don't get the base things there.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Hmm... There is some truth to what you're saying, but I kind of disagree. But reading back on the first post of chapter 1, I agree more...
I suppose I'm a bit biased, though, considering I have one of the stronger characters. (That's another reason I didn't want to have another character, besides being lazy and not being able to think of one )But looking at it right now, Kyo actually has the second most brute force, as Xae and Reev are more agility-type characters. I mean, you'd expect a sylph to be agile with the wings and air-afilliation. And Xae's a... well, actually she's pretty all-around weapon-wise, eh? So far she's used a stalve, a bow, and daggers. Anyway, those are all pretty agility-involved weapons.
As for Tisea (sp) she's a mage, which coupled with the fact that the characters don't know that, we also don't know what her abilities are. Besides the obvious invisibility, I mean. If I speculate, though, I'm guessing she has above average speed (but not superb) since she wears a skirt. Kind of gives the impression that she's stationary half of the time during battle. Unless it's not that tight, but I'll leave my speculation at that.
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KillerSlime
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i can top the Kaz thing, i can play my favorite videogame in my head, NO FEATURES LEFT OUT. every rock in place. that makes me very strange....
besides, one picks up the linguistic traits of the environs one is submitted to.
but still, Kyo's been training all his life, pretty much. the whole "meditating under waterfalls and fighting bears" thing. but then, he still can't breathe fire or shoot lightning from his hands. neither can Xae, and she had the training thrust upon her. when there are human mages, they can't have the thick skins and training of the other races. even the sylphs, who are frail, are still very hard to beat.
the plot doesn't even reference the humans. it's all about these beings, who consider themselves higher and have the power to push it, and their creation. the humans? they haven't the power to have wars of their own. the best they can hope to be is a magi. but that gives me an idea... hehehe... but maybe not... i don't know.
but yeah, that just means the human characters have to try extra hard to prove their race's value. and maybee cream a few elementals.
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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I think it's more like... there's been a couple (or at least one) generations since the dragons were created. I could be wrong since Louie's the one who made the whole story, but that's what's in my head.
So if that were true, I see humans as being there, but not as pathetic as you say. More like becoming more and more involved, like how the first post says that the "Salamanders discovered the humans."
In other words, it's like the humans get discovered and divide up, becoming parts of the different races/affiliations. Pokemon-wise, they're like Dittos, y'know? ^_^
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louie9090
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you guys are all nuts. this is a nut house. and no, i didn't read all that stuff you typed. why?
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KillerSlime
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we've been discussing this racist, unbalanced world. and how annoying everything is.
and how humans are like sheep.
but you're nuts, too.
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~Sylph~
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We're all nuts and I likes it that way.
Ok, here's the skinny/dilly/facts as I see them. Kyo, if humans are sheep, they are the most undustrious sheep ever to exist. Yes, elementals have certian inheirant strengths and certianly my character (if not the other elemental characters) has an 'aire' of superiority based upon that, and what Tolkein would have called 'being an elder race'.
What that doesn't mean is elementals are in fact superior. It would be like calling birds superior to man for their inheirant ability to fly. Worked great for birds for quite some time until man caught up and now sucks poor geese into jet engines forming a nice patte.
Racism, you bet! Sci-Fi and fantasy are a great way to tackle issues most people would be bored out of their minds to read about. If I started talking about how the only way we'd succeed as a species ultimately was if people could put their differences based upon skin color, heritage, culture, beliefs, etc away and working together for the good of all then most people would probably find it a great time to begin taking a nap. If in a work of fiction you have this happen, more people can find it interesting. If somehow the message seaps into their heads that racism is a bad idea, all the better.
Now don't get me wrong. I don't believe our little story is going to accomplish much more than giving us something enjoyable to do. But, again, theirs always hope. And, the fact that you picked up on this subtle point in the story points to that hope all the more.
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louie9090
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hey, i actually read your whole post Sylph. kudos for me! and it's a nice point...
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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Yeah, it brought up a good point.
...But you talked about that point. So I'm done.
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KillerSlime
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good point! i think... nothing more to say after that.
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louie9090
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here's a thought.... just a thought, mind.... screw second characters.... big pain in the @$$. let's skip it, shall we?
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~Sylph~
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Yes and No...
or better said "I mostly agree"
Here's my suggestion, secondary characters continue for those who wish them, die for those that don't, but with a new format in both cases...
This is a story that we are all authoring together and using each other's input/control over their specific character to enhance things, right?. So as long as people can clearly understand which character you are talking about (in my case I usually include something even about characters I dont control) then there is no reason for seperation. Seperation? What?
Meanning no reason to draw a line between when you are talking about any of the characters you control. Instead, just making it clear. That way it doesn't seem like two independant efforts and doesn't disrupt the flow of the narative.
If that sounds like a bad idea and no one but me wants to controll secondary characters it might be fun to switch control of each of them to others to come up with some fun way to have them leave the story/ die/ wander off for months without even a word. (bad sylph)
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louie9090
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actually, i kill characters a lot, but i've never done it in an RP.... hmmmmm.... but yeah. i'm dropping Tisea like a hot brick, but i'm just lazy.
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KillerSlime
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i just think that, looking back on it, i can be very bad at certain things. like making sence. my family seem to think i'd need a translator for conversation. SK is surprisingly good at doing that. but i can't RP sometimes.
i think i just want to drop my second character and forget he or she ever existed. look, it's working!
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louie9090
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ok, now we just gotta get k0zzy boy down here.... hmmmmmm...
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KillerSlime
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kozzy... exists?
maybe... we should just start a fully new one... without him... if he doesn't show up.
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louie9090
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| KillerSlime wrote: | kozzy... exists?
maybe... we should just start a fully new one... without him... if he doesn't show up. |
if he doesn't show up. it'd be weird without k0zzy boy though, considering he's in 19 pages of it...
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KillerSlime
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i mean, REALLY new... as in completely. as in, boom, poof, new.
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louie9090
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ah. well, i'll go give him a visit on dA and see if he responds.
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~Sylph~
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dA? Ok, have I mentioned that I have been trapped in a place outside of time and space since last I was here? No? Ok well, anyways, dA?
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louie9090
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| ~Sylph~ wrote: | | dA? Ok, have I mentioned that I have been trapped in a place outside of time and space since last I was here? No? Ok well, anyways, dA? |
dA. it's a site where you can post art, photography, writing, etc. etc. etc. looks as though k0zzy boy has been inactive of late..... hmmmmmm.... must find better solution...
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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I actually kept with the forums for a long time, but since all that was happening for a while was foamy occasionally posting animations, I stopped visiting.
But hey, look, I'm here. Might not be able to post as much as I'd like to (bad grade-induced restrictions, haha), but I'm sure I could... stay up all night every now and then or something.
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~Sylph~
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Sheesh...
I never knew the forum was having such a negative impact on peoples school lives.
A) School = money later on
B) Forum = fun now
Pick A! (mostly)
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louie9090
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yeah, A is funner.... anyway.... back on teh topic peoples! i forgot what we were talking about though, someone else get back on topic for me.
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KillerSlime
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| louie9090 wrote: | | ~Sylph~ wrote: | | dA? Ok, have I mentioned that I have been trapped in a place outside of time and space since last I was here? No? Ok well, anyways, dA? |
dA. it's a site where you can post art, photography, writing, etc. etc. etc. looks as though k0zzy boy has been inactive of late..... hmmmmmm.... must find better solution... |
In other words, the second largest collection of Emo and the like on the web.
that and people who think they have talent. and. well... need to work on it. alot.
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louie9090
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SOMEBODY GET BACK ON TOPIC PLEASE! guess it'll have to be me.... when are we gunna start doing this again?
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KillerSlime
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good question.
to answer that, (insert army of non-sequitors here).
i really don't know, but i say we put it to a vote.
i vote to start over from the chapter break! since there are four of us, supermajority wins.
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louie9090
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i vote for that too! whee.
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KillerSlime
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Tally is 2-ot, then.
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~Sylph~
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lol, ok make that majority now..
Ready, set...
Restart?
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KillerSlime
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okay then. we don't even need him.
aargh.
i'm going to put a note on my table.
by my floor.
because i put my bed away when i don't use it.
anyway.
note on table.
will have calendar.
will chart days i come.
will improve attendance.
anyway.
~let's do the time warp again!~
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louie9090
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i'll restart it sometime in the very near future.....
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k0zzmick_deemmin
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She said, nine days ago.
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louie9090
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i'm a busy woman. i saw 300 today with my cousin for his birthday. violence+half-naked guys with six packs= love.
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