need an opinion on something...

louie9090 · need an opinion on something...

i made this up while i was waiting for my mom to get off the phone (actually, she's still on it >.<) and i was wondering whether or not to make it something. it's what you might call a scrap or something. i dunno... of course, that is why i'm asking you. i made each line different colors so you wouldn't get confused. hope you like it, because it was loads of fun to write Very Happy

We're not trapped
"So we're trapped?"

"No, that's not what I said; we can't get out."

"Which mean's we're trapped!!!"

"Who says you have to go out to get out?"

"So... you're saying that in order to get out, we have to go in?"

"No."

"Goddam it, stop talking in riddles!"

"I'm not speaking in riddles. You're just overthinking things."

"I am not!"

"Then you're overlooking things."

"I- but you... oh forget it. I'm done arguing with you for now."

"Thank you."

"Mmph."

"What are you eating?"

"Food. What else?"

"No, no, I meant what kind of food?"

"Good food."

"Is your goal in life to annoy me?"

"Yup."

"Will anything I say or do make you stop?"

"Nope."

"What if I told you what I meant earlier about us not being trapped?"

"Maybe."

"Why is that a maybe and not a yes?"

"Because it depends on your answer."

"So if you like the answer you're stop going out of your way to bug me?"

"Mmhmm."

"Really?"

"You bet."

"Ok."

"What are you waiting for?"

"I'm trying to figure out which answer you'll like."

"There's more than one?"

"Actua-"

"Wait, I don't want know. Got your answer yet?"

"Yes."

"... Well, what is it?"

"We can't get out because we're meant to be here."

"And by that you mean...?"

"That It's our destiny to be here."

"..."

"What is it? Was that a good answer?"

"Is the pope jewish?"

"No- oh. dear. Is there any chance you won't kill me?"

"Maybe."

"What can I do?"

"Shut up."

"Ok. I can do that. Shutting up."

"Thank you."

"You're welcome."

k0zzmick_deemmin

It was alright. I'm just glad you didn't spell "you're" "your."

KillerSlime

creepy. very creepy.
the homicidal guy reminds me of someone i know, but he didn't talk about female private parts so not completely. then again, i'm glad that your guy isn't the same.

louie9090

lol KS. i have no idea where it came from but i like it. speaking of that, there's a certain question you two left unanswered.

k0zzmick_deemmin

...What --

...

Wh--

...What the hell was KS talking about? Female private parts?

... wh--

Wait, this is just two people stuck in a situation or a room, right? Not something a whole lot dirtier? Since KS said that, the first half of the story gives me an enirely different view on it.

I may not be the weirdest one here, but I'm certainly the one with the smuttiest mind.

~Sylph~

Usually it's not hard to drag my mind down into the gutter, but I read what KS wrote to mean that he sees this as the inner dialogue of a crazy person or a conversation between two crazy people or perhaps he was just calling Louie crazy. Unsure

Anyways, it's pretty good Louie.

louie9090

wel, it's two peeps in some sort of situation. one's an intulectual and one's more of the lunk head type. but he's not stupid really. just a muscle head. and there is nothing dirty! nothing! trust me, if it was meant to be dirty you'd know. *edit* maybe the next part...? that'd be a prologue or something, so i guess if this part below is with the first part, then it'd be chapter one i guess. i don't know. anyway:

Manners Matter

"What do you mean, you don't have it?!" The man roared at Pierce, making him flinch backwards. "I don't know what you're talking about, and I don't have whatever it is! You've got the wrong man!" He cried desperately. "I was just on my way to Athol and then your men jumped me. I don't know who or what you're talking about!" Two things about his statement were true: one, he didn't have it, and two, he really was on his way to Athol. The rest was an act Pierce was putting on so he could continue living.

not any more as of yet.

k0zzmick_deemmin