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| goombapatrol054 |
poets, unite!this is from the insaniguide forum copied over. i thought you guys might enjoy posting some poems toogo here to learn about the various types of poems
ill start with a limmerick: brat by goombapatrol there once was an unpleasant lad he always acted real bad he stomped on cats toes and fingered his nose he'd make you sure as heck mad! ~sweet princess: a haiku by goombapatrol~ a peachy princess taken by goombas (like me!!) then her hero came My Haikus By goombapatrol054 I have written more, But they are hidden away. Maybe I'll show them. a rare haiku by goombapatrol054 rare made us classics conker, banjo, donkey kong! then nintendo spoke. christmas limerick by goombapatrol There once was a fir tree (a green) The branches on it were quite lean Each time the wind blew It swayed fro and to This was quite a sad sight to be seen Mirror a haiku by goombapatrol A grounded mirror Slowly turns invisible I’d seen a puddle The Spell of the Moon by goomba A glowing finger S t r e t c h e s Reaches the trees Birds fall silent in their nests A silvery breath F l o a t s Glides into the lake Exposed fishes dance A brightening glare Pierces Streams freely in the air Shatters observers’ gazes The Dark by goomba I stagger to my room Terribly tired Gradually swaying head plummets The pillow is a cloud I request a dream Immediately sleep Drowsy dilated eyes perceive My haven as now a hell I plead for discontinue Unquestionably rejected Shadows quiver with emancipation My nightmare is a reality I weep in submission Unknowingly awake I fall back in slumber This time in peace a rock haiku by goombapatrol054 if you please, dear rock dont smash my poor lil' head in attack them, instead! Kayla a haiku by goombpatrol054 this sweet lil' puppy she's cute-thats why you got her but MAN does she bite! (she's been chewing on everything) |
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| KillerSlime |
there are more kinds of poetry than that... Tanka, for instance. what Haiku were derived from. | ||
| ~Sylph~ |
I prefer lyrics mysylph, which though metered rhyme I think deserve their own category. | ||
| goombapatrol054 |
yeah, thats all i could think of..
sylph, is it possible for you to edit the poll? (if not, we could just say our favorite types here) |
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| ~Sylph~ |
Duly edited and I liked your work. I'll share a few of mine though its been forever since I wrote any.
A few token words The words they are so few, But atleast they do come. Most seem meaningless, Yet there still are some, Some that make me ache, Some that make me smile, Some that make me important, Atleast for a little while. Its too Late, for too Late (1st verse) I dont have the time Because its Once upon- A maybe never was ... All the shoulda beens And coulda beens Are I'll get to it- Later's, reached its end (chorus) Its too Late For too late Better not to contemplate Its too late For too late Im too lazy to procrastinate Its too late For too late All of that will have to wait (second verse) And yesterday I meant to say Tommorow never comes But... Lazy suddenly cropped up And it got in the way Or maybe I was dreaming up The excuse for the delay (repeat chorus) (3rd verse) Someday I'll get to Those everythings that I planned to do all along But... I have so many things I forgot to start or Have yet to leave unfinished Like this... |
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| goombapatrol054 |
heres a few more of mine:
In the moonlight by goomba In the moonlight, howling hounds Sing sad and mournful midnight sounds. Hopeful, hungry, hurt, and lonely Crying for their one and only Lost lovers reunite in song Music flows from deep ‘their heart Missing still a vital part Lovers lonely, in deep song In the moonlight. The Sky and the Clouds simlile by goomba The sky is like a calm pond, A ripple shimmers above. The clouds are like a pillow Which on top of, thou art dead to humankind The sky is right atop the world, A great watchtower o’er ev’rything. The clouds are merely pretenders, They obscure the heavens with their lies. But the sky ‘tis one great illusion, While the clouds dance before your eyes! The sky is only your reflection externally, Whereas clouds reveal what you hide. Endless skies show what thou neighbor can see, Greatness, which is owed to yourself (not at all). You conceal what you feel, And then feel, but nothin’ at all. Then the clouds, thou must know, Are blunt, yet sincere. ‘Tis the honest-man who is ugly, Yet the most ‘tractive of all! My body craves to be sky-like, Yet my soul knows clouds are destiny. my "explanation" of sky and clouds (only I can fully understand this poem) Sky = External self (appearance) Clouds = Internal self (soul)
 done for now. more later
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| louie9090 |
dude, you forgot clerihews! ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clerihew ) they're the only kind of poem i can write... lol. i'm more of an author than a poet 
btw, those poems you wrote are cool! |
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| goombapatrol054 |
i dedicate this poem to sylph, the meryl fanatic:
meryl- a haiku about by goomba meryl's sweet melody heard by fish throughout the tank stinkey's got a job! |
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